Viewerhelp talk:Buying and owning land

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I'm not exactly sure I understand the third sentence in this section:

"Why should you own land? Whether it's creating a cozy home, a stylish store, a bustling nightclub, or just using land as a canvas for artistic self-expression, there are many possibilities. Think of it this way: the web has domains like secondlife.com you can reliably access to learn more. In a same way, every piece of Second Life land has a special address you can share with others by way of landmarks and SLurls so they can come visit via teleport. That way, whether you're inviting a newfound friend over or increasing your sales, you have reliability and peace of mind."

Are you trying to put SLurls and landmarks into the context of being easy for people to use, just like URLs? If so, I'd suggest perhaps changing this section to this:

"Why should you own land? Whether it's creating a cozy home, a stylish store, a bustling nightclub, or just using land as a canvas for artistic self-expression, there are many possibilities. And if you want people to find your land in Second Life, it's easy to do. Every piece of Second Life land has a special address you can share with others by way of landmarks and SLurls (that's a Second Life URL) so they can come visit via teleport. That way, you'll have peace of mind: whether you're inviting a new-found friend over to your home or increasing sales at your store."

But I won't change it--in case I'm misunderstanding your intent! :-) Courtney Linden 21:20, 18 March 2010 (UTC)