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It is currently ("as of this writing") ''not'' possible to submit pictures for the login screen. As an alternative, the article suggests to make a contribution to the showcase instead. That is what the subsection tries to say. I ''think'' that replacing "not" with "note" doesn't carry the same message. In fact, I'd even believe that it wouldn't be a real sentence anymore. I'd expect a colon after "Note" and then an explanation on what I'm supposed to note. Though I might be mistaken. Can you point out more details about your revision so I can understand why it should be in place instead of the current version? Thanks in advance! :D<br>
It is currently ("as of this writing") ''not'' possible to submit pictures for the login screen. As an alternative, the article suggests to make a contribution to the showcase instead. That is what the subsection tries to say. I ''think'' that replacing "not" with "note" doesn't carry the same message. In fact, I'd even believe that it wouldn't be a real sentence anymore. I'd expect a colon after "Note" and then an explanation on what I'm supposed to note. Though I might be mistaken. Can you point out more details about your revision so I can understand why it should be in place instead of the current version? Thanks in advance! :D<br>
--[[File:Zai_signature.png|45px|link=User:Zai Lynch]] <sup><small>([[User talk:Zai Lynch|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Zai Lynch|contribs]])</small></sup> 06:36, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
--[[File:Zai_signature.png|45px|link=User:Zai Lynch]] <sup><small>([[User talk:Zai Lynch|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Zai Lynch|contribs]])</small></sup> 06:36, 6 December 2009 (UTC)
:I tried to clarify it in the article with an additional "no", "however" and "instead". Maybe you can have a look at the current version as well and give feedback to that. :-) --[[File:Zai_signature.png|45px|link=User:Zai Lynch]] <sup><small>([[User talk:Zai Lynch|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Zai Lynch|contribs]])</small></sup> 06:41, 6 December 2009 (UTC)

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Not vs. Note

Heyas Gnome! :-)
I noticed your addition to the Login screen article. You replaced "Not" with "Note", though although I'm not native in English, I believe that is wrong (hence why I reverted it twice). I will try to point out why:
It is currently ("as of this writing") not possible to submit pictures for the login screen. As an alternative, the article suggests to make a contribution to the showcase instead. That is what the subsection tries to say. I think that replacing "not" with "note" doesn't carry the same message. In fact, I'd even believe that it wouldn't be a real sentence anymore. I'd expect a colon after "Note" and then an explanation on what I'm supposed to note. Though I might be mistaken. Can you point out more details about your revision so I can understand why it should be in place instead of the current version? Thanks in advance! :D
--Zai signature.png (talk|contribs) 06:36, 6 December 2009 (UTC)

I tried to clarify it in the article with an additional "no", "however" and "instead". Maybe you can have a look at the current version as well and give feedback to that. :-) --Zai signature.png (talk|contribs) 06:41, 6 December 2009 (UTC)